Second Magazine draft

 

After I had created my original draft I had asked some friends and my media teacher what they thought about my front cover and they all said the same thing " The new to the games needs to be moved sightly more to the right" when I asked them why they said it was because my coverstars head was in the way of the coverline. Another improvement I had made was to change the background gradient from white-grey to black-grey I was only experimenting when I did this but I preferred the results to my original magazine so I decided to stick with it.